wiggly eyebrows aside I really love the dialogue exchange between tigertail and primrose. generally I REALLY LOVE HOW YOU WRITE ALL YOUR DIALOGUE?? everything’s just so. just so good. it flows so well. and it’s smart and witty. and just. auHGG
waahh thank you tho! dialogue is so tricky bc while you want people to speak naturally, you also want it to be comprehensible and to move the plot. i’m glad you think i’m doing a good job bc i never can tell myself
wiggly eyebrows
wiggly eyebrows aside I really love the dialogue exchange between tigertail and primrose. generally I REALLY LOVE HOW YOU WRITE ALL YOUR DIALOGUE?? everything’s just so. just so good. it flows so well. and it’s smart and witty. and just. auHGG
waahh thank you tho! dialogue is so tricky bc while you want people to speak naturally, you also want it to be comprehensible and to move the plot. i’m glad you think i’m doing a good job bc i never can tell myself
I just wanna say that I love the subtle shading defining Tigertail’s muscles here *o* Those arms…